Look out Into oblivion; Nothing hurts more than Distancing this divison. Somewhere, I'll find you again, Lying again(st) Evergreens, but will You ever come back to me?
Dude, I like this poem! I really like the title - it's an eyecatcher. The language is also very seamless and lyrical, such as "nothing hurts more than distancing this division" or "I'll find you again, lying again(st) evergreens," and that (st) also really works... yeah, I'm likin' this poem. :)
And you totally used a picture from The Crow for alien suburb, don't deny it. :)
...teehee. i actually took that picture like a year ago; just shoved myself into my tiny closet and creepily peered out....everyone tells me that crow thing, and though I adore Brandon Lee (r.i.p) its actually an old mask of the drummer from slipknot, haha. glad you like this one, i felt compelled to write a short piece.
Dude, I like this poem! I really like the title - it's an eyecatcher. The language is also very seamless and lyrical, such as "nothing hurts more than distancing this division" or "I'll find you again, lying again(st) evergreens," and that (st) also really works... yeah, I'm likin' this poem. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd you totally used a picture from The Crow for alien suburb, don't deny it. :)
...teehee. i actually took that picture like a year ago; just shoved myself into my tiny closet and creepily peered out....everyone tells me that crow thing, and though I adore Brandon Lee (r.i.p) its actually an old mask of the drummer from slipknot, haha. glad you like this one, i felt compelled to write a short piece.
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